Nicely done. You nailed the issue without even knowing. Basically you said that Bader isn't a good fit because he does nothing to change the fact that: "This team’s lineup is riddled with hitters who are hard to rely on." The fact that Bader doesn't fix that is not the issue. In the old days of journalism that would have been called burying the lead. You also mentioned that: (if the) "Twins don't get bounce-backs from their young players who struggled down the stretch, Bader could be a frustrating piece amid a sputtering offense." Again, in that case, the issue is not Bader. The issue is the lack of bounce-backs from their young players who struggled down the stretch. Burying the lead again. This reads like Derek Falvey wrote it.