Feedback on DiamondCentric design (Perkins Bullpen Car Co)

[Brock Beauchamp]

Parker and I are tossing around ideas for baseball-themed shirts this season. We originally envisioned this design as a basic "bring back bullpen cars" but decided that it'd be better if we focused on the Twins' best relief pitcher instead.

 

Thoughts? Ideas? Criticisms?

 

[PseudoSABR]

I like the aesthetic, for sure. But the Cap/Top of the car with the Minnesota logo looks 'off' to me, and, imo, muddles the whole concept of the cart.

[Brock Beauchamp]

I'm definitely not married to the Minnesota icon on the car. Anyone else?

[Brock Beauchamp]

What about this shirt? Nice and simple.

 

[DaveW]

Will you please do a nick punto tribute one?

 

Or a tribute to Punto, Batista, Juan Castro (use that outline of him dropping the ball), Valencia.

 

Gone but not forgotten.

[James]

Parker and I are tossing around ideas for baseball-themed shirts this season. We originally envisioned this design as a basic "bring back bullpen cars" but decided that it'd be better if we focused on the Twins' best relief pitcher instead.

 

Thoughts? Ideas? Criticisms?

 

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I like this one. I like the MN outline too, but I can kind of see how it looks "off".